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Originally posted on January 20th, 2011. Brady Koerner, who as part of an earlier plot had retired from the police force (and thus had his schedule freed up to hunt more monsters), follows up on an old lead on a nightclub (run by an old vampire, a mage, and someone who's part demon) just outside of town. The song referenced is this one, which I'm linking here because it doesn't seem appropriate to me to make it part of the story itself.
This was a lead-in to one of the last story arcs of the game. I was going for sort of a "pre-credits teaser from a Supernatural episode" vibe on this one.
This was a lead-in to one of the last story arcs of the game. I was going for sort of a "pre-credits teaser from a Supernatural episode" vibe on this one.
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This is wonderfully atmospheric.
I had just a little trouble following the fight scene, but I did get the spirit of it
My only real comment is the continuity error: You first said "No windows" - and then later said "Large picture window" for the office.
- you could easily shift things around so he checks the interior first, then the exterior wall and lead into "No clocks, no .... and no windows, save for one - a large picture window ..."
Enjoy my 2 cents
I had just a little trouble following the fight scene, but I did get the spirit of it
My only real comment is the continuity error: You first said "No windows" - and then later said "Large picture window" for the office.
- you could easily shift things around so he checks the interior first, then the exterior wall and lead into "No clocks, no .... and no windows, save for one - a large picture window ..."
Enjoy my 2 cents